snowball873's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[workwork]

A fair start...

I have a feeling you didn't want the music to play over its self and build up like that, but its a nice start in flash none the less! What you want to do so the music doesn't stack like that is:
1.go to window>actions
2.go to the timeline, and left click the last keyframe and make it a keyframe if its not already.
3.Be sure that keyframe is selected, go back to actions and click script assist
4.Click the plus in actions>global functions>timeline control> go to
5. Be sure its go to and play, and it goes to frame 2!
6.Make sure your music starts on frame 1.
7.(ctrl+enter) to test movie

It should now loop but not loop the music!

SplinterNrurse responds:

actually when i play the swf file on my pc i didn't have that issue, so i don't know where that came from :s

anyway thx for the advice i'll fix it when i have the time :)

[Entertainment]

Great Animation, but not voice acting

The animation was fantastic, but the voice acting needed some work. For one, you were too close to the mike I could hear you breathing and your lips smacking. Try putting a clean sock or some other cloth over your mike and keeping the mike at least 6 in. form your mouth. Also, your joker impression wasn't the best. there are plenty of other creepy voices you can use that you would probably be better at.

akoRn responds:

thx, theres always room for improvement for all of us. thanks

[Beauty is Humanity]

That was really good, but...

There's room to improve with the animation and the compressed sound killed the epic-ness for me. Even with that, its a great movie.

vezanmatics responds:

how do i make the sound better?

[The Love I'm Searching 4]

Inspiring

My 9th grade vocabulary can't find words to describe how awesome that was. The first time I watched it I was just amazed with the level of polish and in love with the characters and level of depth you put into them. I always love to see when animation is built around song and lets you see what the animator sees and using it to express how they feel. I can only dream to achieve what you have with this work of art someday, and can honestly say this is one of the greatest storys I have seen in an animation on Newgrounds. Thank you.

Skaijo responds:

*wishes I had a 9th grade vocabulary

You're a bit too sweet. XD But my greatest aspiration as just a hobby-animator-person was a get a review like this from a peer. <3

So for that, many thanks.

[Jesusmas]

Nice Message

I liked it (hints the 9), but this is something that a lot of Newgrounders won't like and I don't understand why. What they need to realize is this is everything by everyone not a bunch of nasty crap like porn and stuff but as soon as you touch on religion you've gone too far! Really guys, if you don't like it don't smear it. He didn't do anything wrong by voicing his opinion and trying to spread a little cheer to those who share it.

5/5
9/10 (little short)

imjeffhip responds:

religion is always going to be a touchy subject, people have issues with it

[Flim]

That was fantastic!

The tweening, animation, and the music were all great. The one thing I would have gone back and added were some clouds or a sun. That would really help you see the movement of th character a lot better. Still a great film though!

biblo responds:

Pffft, no