Funny, but too short!
You had a really great idea here, and it would have been great to see swipers life beyond the swiping joke. I didn't give it a higher score because the joke was funny, but the art and animation was only so-so.
A fair start...
I have a feeling you didn't want the music to play over its self and build up like that, but its a nice start in flash none the less! What you want to do so the music doesn't stack like that is:
1.go to window>actions
2.go to the timeline, and left click the last keyframe and make it a keyframe if its not already.
3.Be sure that keyframe is selected, go back to actions and click script assist
4.Click the plus in actions>global functions>timeline control> go to
5. Be sure its go to and play, and it goes to frame 2!
6.Make sure your music starts on frame 1.
7.(ctrl+enter) to test movie
It should now loop but not loop the music!
actually when i play the swf file on my pc i didn't have that issue, so i don't know where that came from :s
anyway thx for the advice i'll fix it when i have the time :)
It wasn't bad...
BUT this was just PSP squirrels with skydiving.
Why aren't these three shorts in a colab of sorts?
The humor was ok, the animation was good, and the art was great, but you can't use copyrighted music.
Great Animation, but not voice acting
The animation was fantastic, but the voice acting needed some work. For one, you were too close to the mike I could hear you breathing and your lips smacking. Try putting a clean sock or some other cloth over your mike and keeping the mike at least 6 in. form your mouth. Also, your joker impression wasn't the best. there are plenty of other creepy voices you can use that you would probably be better at.
thx, theres always room for improvement for all of us. thanks
That was really good, but...
There's room to improve with the animation and the compressed sound killed the epic-ness for me. Even with that, its a great movie.
how do i make the sound better?
I freaked out when I heard the Amelie Soundtrack music, I love that stuff!
My 9th grade vocabulary can't find words to describe how awesome that was. The first time I watched it I was just amazed with the level of polish and in love with the characters and level of depth you put into them. I always love to see when animation is built around song and lets you see what the animator sees and using it to express how they feel. I can only dream to achieve what you have with this work of art someday, and can honestly say this is one of the greatest storys I have seen in an animation on Newgrounds. Thank you.
*wishes I had a 9th grade vocabulary
You're a bit too sweet. XD But my greatest aspiration as just a hobby-animator-person was a get a review like this from a peer. <3
So for that, many thanks.
I liked it (hints the 9), but this is something that a lot of Newgrounders won't like and I don't understand why. What they need to realize is this is everything by everyone not a bunch of nasty crap like porn and stuff but as soon as you touch on religion you've gone too far! Really guys, if you don't like it don't smear it. He didn't do anything wrong by voicing his opinion and trying to spread a little cheer to those who share it.
9/10 (little short)
religion is always going to be a touchy subject, people have issues with it
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