snowball873's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[workwork]

A fair start...

I have a feeling you didn't want the music to play over its self and build up like that, but its a nice start in flash none the less! What you want to do so the music doesn't stack like that is:
1.go to window>actions
2.go to the timeline, and left click the last keyframe and make it a keyframe if its not already.
3.Be sure that keyframe is selected, go back to actions and click script assist
4.Click the plus in actions>global functions>timeline control> go to
5. Be sure its go to and play, and it goes to frame 2!
6.Make sure your music starts on frame 1.
7.(ctrl+enter) to test movie

It should now loop but not loop the music!

SplinterNrurse responds:

actually when i play the swf file on my pc i didn't have that issue, so i don't know where that came from :s

anyway thx for the advice i'll fix it when i have the time :)

[Entertainment]

Great Animation, but not voice acting

The animation was fantastic, but the voice acting needed some work. For one, you were too close to the mike I could hear you breathing and your lips smacking. Try putting a clean sock or some other cloth over your mike and keeping the mike at least 6 in. form your mouth. Also, your joker impression wasn't the best. there are plenty of other creepy voices you can use that you would probably be better at.

akoRn responds:

thx, theres always room for improvement for all of us. thanks

[Beauty is Humanity]

That was really good, but...

There's room to improve with the animation and the compressed sound killed the epic-ness for me. Even with that, its a great movie.

vezanmatics responds:

how do i make the sound better?

[The Love I'm Searching 4]

Inspiring

My 9th grade vocabulary can't find words to describe how awesome that was. The first time I watched it I was just amazed with the level of polish and in love with the characters and level of depth you put into them. I always love to see when animation is built around song and lets you see what the animator sees and using it to express how they feel. I can only dream to achieve what you have with this work of art someday, and can honestly say this is one of the greatest storys I have seen in an animation on Newgrounds. Thank you.

Skaijo responds:

*wishes I had a 9th grade vocabulary

You're a bit too sweet. XD But my greatest aspiration as just a hobby-animator-person was a get a review like this from a peer. <3

So for that, many thanks.